Putting my foot in it

WALT: Put our ideas and details into a poem form.

Success criteria:Detailed ideas, Written in a poem, Use S.N.T ( show not tell ) in your word choice, Entertain our audiences.  

Ideas	Detail
i slipped over into a puddle and my sister saw.	me and my sister on a rainy day sister was on her phone with her friend walking down the driveway i slipped into a puddle
when i was walking and talking with my friends i smashed into a  pole.	i was distracted by my friend kept on talking she made me forget where i'm going. i felt hurt and i was hoping no one else was me.
*When kapa haka did masterton exchange.	kapa haka did masterton exchange. we went to ocean spa we were in the pools me my mates were playing my mate accidentally untied my bikini it came off there were boys around then they did it again on porpoise worst thing about it was that they drawn attention. i felt embarrassed and angry and my mates.